There is a saying in the music business to the effect that
"good songwriters borrow, great songwriters steal." Anyone who doesn't
believe that to be true will struggle to feel at peace with David
Clement-Davies' new epic fantasy, Firebringer.
Firebringer is a tale set in a Scotland of long ago in
which an unnatural body politic has imposed itself on the red deer of the
lowland. The tone and sentiment of Firebringer clearly evoke Richard
Adams' Watership Down and yet, in the first one hundred pages of the
book, Clement-Davies makes it clear that he is no less than a virtuoso at
intermingling other writers' narrative devices into a single, almost wholly
derivative story.
The story opens by employing the age old theme of a
prophecy that someone with a distinguishing attribute will be born, and then go
on to unseat some tyrant or other. We may expect that the tyrant will be on the
lookout for the prophesied one,
and that
some wise, Merlin like figure, will see to it that the baby in question, ala
King Arthur and Moses, is raised by someone other than his parents, unaware of
his true parentage and destiny.
In this case a fawn with a white oak leaf mark on his brow
is prophesied. The mark is a suitable device for a prophesied deer, as we cannot
reasonably expect a deer to pull a sword from a stone. Davies dresses up the
Biblical and Arthurian elements by borrowing directly from J.R.R Tolkien's
treatment of Aragorn, the prophesied King whose hands were those of a healer.
Rannoch, the fawn in question, like his analogue Aragorn, is prophesied to be
"born a healer and a King."
The evil at work in the herd is a combination of
historical allegory drawn directly from Nazi Germany, and plot elements taken
directly from George Orwell's 1984. In this case Anlach, the ritual combat for
supremacy within the herd, rather than parliamentary elections, are suspended by
special circumstances. Meanwhile, an odious secret police force replaces the
more independent Outriders, and the children are taken off into a deer version
of Hitler Youth.
As with the prophecy element Clement-Davies overlays the
traditional and allegorical underpinnings with more modern plunder,
directly employing Orwell's vision of children spying on their parents. "At
these schools' the fawns were also taught to show absolute loyalty to the
Draila, even above their parents. Indeed, they were even encouraged to spy on
their parents...and report suspicious comments."
The reader, confronted with this hailstorm of
uncomfortably familiar plot developments, cannot help but ponder what the author
intended by so graphically borrowing narrative elements from different writers
and then draping them on top of familiar themes taken from folklore, scripture,
and history. We can safely assume that it is founded on the grand idea of the
organic unity of all traditions, folklore and history. That such a justification
sounds good, but is itself sadly familiar and overused, is a fitting commentary
on Davies-Clements' method.