
Here
Bullet

By Brian Turner
Reviewed by
Kenny Brechner
Poetry is rather a difficult
subject for review. On the one hand, bad poetry has so much company that one
feels somewhat akin to complaining about finding trash at the dump. Good poetry,
on the other hand, has succeeded in its purpose, to capture a complex moment of
being with language. Using other language to describe that language runs the
almost certain hazard of being awkward at best. Still, one wants to let people
know that an excellent book of poems is just that.
Brian Turner, a seven year
army veteran, who served most recently in Iraq as an infantry team leader with
the 3rd Stryker brigade, has published a collection of poems set in Iraq
entitled Here, Bullet, with Alice James Books, the nationally acclaimed
poetry cooperative operating as an affiliate of the University of Maine at
Farmington. In one of the poems, Sadiq, Turner reflects that "It should
make you shake and sweat,/nightmare you, strand you in a desert/ of irrevocable
desolation, the consequences/ seared into the vein, no matter what adrenaline/
feeds the muscle its courage, no matter/ what god shines down on you, no matter/
what crackling pain and anger/ you carry in your fists, my friend,/ it should
break your heart to kill."
What is true of killing is
also true of Turner’s war poems. Readers should be strongly moved by them.
Their evocation of loss is achieved with a series of juxtapositions, of artistry
and humanity, imagery and effect, perspective and emotion. The poems on the
pages of Here, Bullet, with their immediacy of impact, their universality
of theme, their blend of cultural and historical insight, and their many tiered
reverberations of the aftermath of gut wrenching violence, make for a powerful
reading experience. Whoops. (See above)
Turner is a narrative poet,
not something in vogue, but indeed, as has often been remarked, success is its
own best argument. Turner’s success as a narrator stems from the integrity of
his focus on degrees of connection to the death and loss which surround him.
Calling for a medivac Turner reports that "I tell him two, two patients
urgent surgical though that doesn’t really tell him Sgt. Randolph has four
children and can’t die here, his wife wouldn’t allow it if she knew.’ What
could be more poignant than Randolph’s wife’s ineffectual decree by proxy
inserted here.
Turner is also effective in
evoking loss through connections between the observer and the observed.
"The skeletons rest in their boxes/ still slack-jawed twenty years later,/
as if amazed by their own deaths./I want to lie down among them,/ to be wrapped
in sheets like the flags/ of nations, banded in light and shadow./ I want the
Red Cross Worker to lean over ,/ So I can see the tired look in her eyes/ as she
writes down my name."
The relationship Turner
establishes with the reader is not dialogue but a tidal insistence on
reflection, that if there is meaning in loss, there must be meaning in what
precedes loss, in what is related to loss. There is no harm in such reflection,
argues Here, Bullet, the rather, harm stems from the lack of it.